Hope seems to be fading away,
Optimism is on the verge to betray;
Life is painted all over blue,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
Nothing seems to be going right,
Peaceful days are out of sight;
Problems are many, solutions a few,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
Shattered dreams n grit weakened,
Life seems to have reached a dead-end;
Now I don’t know what to do,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
- Kanupriya
This picture is one of my acrylic paintings done last year & as far as this post is concerned, ummm very unlike of me to write something in this style. Initially I wrote a post about absence of “Mr. Luck” from my life in a general paragraph style but few editing here & there has given it a shape like this. Wondering what could be the reason for the same – maybe I’m into lots of poems these days esp. hindi ones as I am working on typing & editing whole lot of poems of my mom or maybe it’s my gloomy & introspective mood! Hmmm…
Optimism is on the verge to betray;
Life is painted all over blue,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
Nothing seems to be going right,
Peaceful days are out of sight;
Problems are many, solutions a few,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
Shattered dreams n grit weakened,
Life seems to have reached a dead-end;
Now I don’t know what to do,
Luck has bid its final adieu.
- Kanupriya
This picture is one of my acrylic paintings done last year & as far as this post is concerned, ummm very unlike of me to write something in this style. Initially I wrote a post about absence of “Mr. Luck” from my life in a general paragraph style but few editing here & there has given it a shape like this. Wondering what could be the reason for the same – maybe I’m into lots of poems these days esp. hindi ones as I am working on typing & editing whole lot of poems of my mom or maybe it’s my gloomy & introspective mood! Hmmm…
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22 comments :
Good try and success too! Nice poem....
Wow, that's a beautiful painting!
And very nice poem too, though quite sad but maybe it reflects your current mood or state of mind well.
Good painting, but poem is very sad, try to come out of this sadness.
very nicely put down n i also
v nicely put down and identify totallu with it...somehow luck makes u adjust so much that after a point u stop realising how much u are adjusting!!!!
Wow...the painting looks mind blowing!! now am confused which adjective to use for the poetry. Dont do this to us kanu,the lesser mortal readers who have limited vocabulary :-).
At times gloom inspires us to do things which we wont do in a normal frame of mind.
Hi, is it your first poem? Its really really nice, luvd reading it & cud relate to it mayb becoz m also goin thru same mood.
That's a beautiful painting!!
Nice poem too...
@ Nids: :D thnx
@ Meera: Hmmm, its sad but that's what I felt like writing
@ Renu: Hmmm trying :)
@ tellmeyourdreams: yea agree
@ nautankey: hee hee hee
@ shefaly: no, its not. have written some earlier too but loooong back when i was in school & college.
@ survivor: thanx :)
hey kanu, nice painting & very nice poem too :-). BTW y have u written "unlike" of u? did u stop writing poems? i still remember your lovely poem "I dream" which got published in college magazine. Keep writing, me also starting my blog soon :D but of course I will only write abt sonny dear.
Hi Kanu,
I must say the poem and the Painting is awsome... Hope is the only thing we live in life with... it may fade away but you can bounce it back... listen to music especially of a sitar player niladri kumar.. it will calm you down. And dont forget the taquila ha ha ha.... bounce back beautiful lady... life is to enjoy and have fun with. dont let it gloom away....
Hey Kanu.....no words here....all i can do is bow to ur tallent and say keep writting....loved the poem n the painting
cheer up:)
you really are a multi-talented person, i always wished i cud sketh
@ Anu: hmmm...good old college days! Yea I think I've stopped writing poems for quite many years now.And send me ur blog link soon :)
@ Laksh: Heyyy gr8 to see u here & thanx for the lovely comment lady! When I have company like you around me, I am sure I'll bounce back :D
@ Tarun: Hey so good to see u here, never knew earlier u into blogging too, will visit ur link soon & thanks for ur nice words :)
@ Smita: :D :) :D
@ Maya: thnx :)
beautiful painting, beautiful poem...
ironically both on little less jovial side!
hey both the poem and the pic is so touching..a sense of loneliness and a painful tug which we often feel!!! gr8 :) sometimes such moods make you creative! the product sure is gr8!
nice painting, and lovely poem
Beautiful!
Both the painting and the poem.
And I can totally identify with how sometimes you do not intend writing a poem and the words just flow. Hope it happens more often.
And hope that was just a phase and Mr luck is back now.
nice poem and an awesome painting...
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